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Faralm 8
Postad: 3 apr 20:44

Informative speech feedback engelska 6

Jag läser engelska 6 och jag har skrivit ett informative speech och har knåpat ihop en text men vet ej om jag har gjort rätt. Feedback vid grammatik. 

stellish 8
Postad: 6 apr 09:09

Take a look on the "malala was shot in the side head while returning home by a pakastani gunman" it doesn't look right. otherwise it was really good!

Faralm 8
Postad: 6 apr 09:12
stellish skrev:

Take a look on the "malala was shot in the side head while returning home by a pakastani gunman" it doesn't look right. otherwise it was really good!

Hej 

Skulle du ge exempel på hur jag ska ändra den? 

Tack för ditt svar 

Aivatco 6
Postad: 9 apr 22:26

Hej!

 

Jag hade skrivit meningen typ såhär : While returning home from school Malala was shot in the side of her head by a Taliban gunman.

eller: Upon returning home from school Malala was shot by a Taliban gunman in the side of her head. 

Superbra text annars, kommer säkert bli ett jättebra tal.

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