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PaleWhite 164
Postad: 18 okt 2018

Informell brev feedback ((engelska)))

Hej!

Jag har fått till uppgift att skriva ett informellt brev som uppgift i engelskan. 

Tacksam för feedback 

 

Dear Mr XXXX

My name is XXXX and i am 23 years old. I would like to be a police constable in London at South East England.

I think this job would fit me because i have worked as a security guard inside London City Airport.  As a security guard in London City Airport i was excellent at spying and guarding people and the society. I worked quite late on the night and i have experience working shifts.


This job suits me because i have previous experience. I like to make the world a better place where people are feeling happy and are safe from all crime and evil people.

I have easy to talk to other people about their problems and i am always kindly to people who need help.


Physically i  have a good fitness. I am training in MMA where i train different kinds of martial arts. I have gone to UK:s military in one year.

I am healthy and strong.

I have a good experience driving cars because i have been in a driving education for vehicles and transportation. I have no problem using weapons and other productions.

 

 

tack för svar!

Laguna 10959
Postad: 18 okt 2018

Jag undrar om jag skulle placera en anställningsansökan i kategorin informella brev. 

linhhh123 12
Postad: 30 sep 2020 Redigerad: 30 sep 2020

Din text verkar ganska bra. Men behöver påpeka lite grejer.

- När du ska använda "I", kom ihåg att det ska alltid vara ett stort I och inte ett litet även fast den inte står efter punkt. Lärde mig det från min eng lärare

- På "I am healthy and strong" borde du kanske skriva mer än att du är hälsosam och stark. Du kan blanda in meningen med den förra meningen. Ex. "Physically, I have a good fitness since I've trained MMA for xxxx years. I have good experience with self-defense and we train different kinds of martial arts. Therefore, I consider myself healthy and strong."

 

(oj hehe såg inte att detta var publicerad 2018)

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