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paruthy18 1482 – Avstängd
Postad: 25 apr 2018 Redigerad: 25 apr 2018

My hobby!

som träning inför NP har jag skrivit det här texten, kan nån rätta den?

Playing badminton is one of my favourite hobbies, which makes me feel excited and turns my passion on. I started playing badminton since I was 9 years old.Badminton is what I do after my school hours. I usually play badminton with my club but if it`s a leisure time though i often play it with my brothers in yard. Why I am chasing for this sport as a hobby is due to several reasons. The first reason is Saina Nehwal, she is a professional badminton player from India, who has been inspiration and role model for me. The second reason is that badminton is a healthy sport, which makes me relax and gets rid of the stress. If I am in a bad mood, I will choose to play badminton rather than play computer games or go shopping. The third reason is that I can make a lot of friends who are also enthusiastic about badminton. One of my best friends,Ayan, is a badminton player that I met in Örebro badminton court. More surprisingly, she is also a highschool student! That is awesome! These are the reasons why I love badminton as a hobby.

 

mvh!

Anonym.04 8
Postad: 25 apr 2018

Det ända jag skulle ändra på är ” I started playing badminton since I was 9 years old.” det är kanske inte fel att skriva så men ett alternativ är att skriva ” I started playing badminton WHEN I was 9 years old. “

Bra text annars!

paruthy18 1482 – Avstängd
Postad: 25 apr 2018

tack för hjälpen ... nu förstår jag !!!

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