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Postad: 11 sep 2018

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Hej! Engelska är inte mitt starkaste ämne. Jag har precis skrivit en kort text om livet innan TV:n. Om du ville läsa igenom den och ge förslag på hur jag kan vidareutveckla meningarna och

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vore det toppen!

HÄR NEDAN ÄR TEXTEN: ("they" i detta fall är mina mor- och farföräldrar)

   Life before TV wasn’t boring at all. They spend a lot of their time outside talking with neighbours, going to shops, or just going for a walk. If they wanted entertainment they read or listened to the radio. Sometimes they did also go to the theatre and cinema, often with friends or family.
   I don't think they knew as much as we know today about the rest of the world, because they almost only had the newspapers to read news from. Gossip was a common phenomenon, it was mostly about new things that had happened in their area.
   Music, then? It wasn't as easily accessible as it is today. They could only listen to it on the radio sometimes or go to concerts. But, I think that made music even more valuable. Music was something you associated with friends and family because you usually experienced music together with them.

Life before TV wasn’t boring at all. They spend spent a lot of their time outside talking with neighbours, going to shops, or just going for a walk. If they wanted entertainment they read or listened to the radio (syftningsfel, nu skriver du att de har läst radion). Sometimes they did also go went to the theatre and or cinema, often with friends or family.

I don't think they knew as much as we know today about the rest of the world, because they almost only had the newspapers to read news from only got the news from the newspaper. Gossip was a common phenomenon, it was mostly about new things that had happened in their area.

Music, then? It wasn't as easily accessible as it is today. They could only listen to it on the radio sometimes or go to concerts. But, I think that made music even more valuable. Music was something you associated with friends and family because you usually experienced music it together with them.

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Postad: 11 sep 2018

Life before TV wasn’t boring at all. My grandparents spent They spend a lot of their time outdoors outside talking with neighbours, going to shops, or just going for taking a walk. If they wanted entertainment they read a book or listened to the radio. Sometimes they did also go went to the theatre and or the cinema, often with friends or family.
I don't think they knew as much as we know today about the rest of the world, because they almost only had news from the newspapers to read news from. The latest local news as gossip was a common phenomenon, . It was essentially mostly about new things that what had happened in their own neighborhood area.
Music, then? It wasn't as easily accessible as it is today. They could only sometimes listen to it on the radio sometimes or go to concerts. But, I think it that made music even more valuable. Music was something you associated with friends and family, because you usually experienced it music together with them.

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