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Sondos 5
Postad: 28 sep 2020

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One night 


One night I walked alone, the weather was hard and very cold. I walked alone because I was very sad. My best friend died, I felt very bad and was sad. Because she and I were best friends for five years. 


Her name was Linda, she was 10 years old. And she was a very kind person. 


I don't know where I walked to, but when I walked I smelled something. I don't know what the smell was, but I know the smell belonged to an animal. I walked and walked… the smell was strong, I saw the animal and it was a cat. Yes, it was a cat, I was surprised.


The cat makes me feel better than I was. The cat was very beautiful, it was white and brown. I took the cat to my house and I taught the cat a lot of things to answer his name, to understand the world “no”, to play with a little ball, and to play hide-and-seek with me. 


So we lived happily ever after.

aquastar 37
Postad: 2 okt 2020

vad menar du med att "the weather was hard"? 

sarammm 27
Postad: 4 okt 2020

menar du att vädret är varmt?

Abdullah112 1
Postad: 1 nov 2020

vad gör man här

slash 26
Postad: 17 nov 2020

"The cat makes me feel better than I was. The cat was very beautiful, it was white and brown." Du skriver i preteritum, dåtid, alltså borde du skriva "The cat made me feel better". Du behöver inte ha med "...than I was." , det låter inte bra.

"Because she and I were best friends for five years. " - personligen hade jag skrivit "Because she and I had been best friends for five years."

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