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One night I walked alone, the weather was hard and very cold. I walked alone because I was very sad. My best friend died, I felt very bad and was sad. Because she and I were best friends for five years.
Her name was Linda, she was 10 years old. And she was a very kind person.
I don't know where I walked to, but when I walked I smelled something. I don't know what the smell was, but I know the smell belonged to an animal. I walked and walked… the smell was strong, I saw the animal and it was a cat. Yes, it was a cat, I was surprised.
The cat makes me feel better than I was. The cat was very beautiful, it was white and brown. I took the cat to my house and I taught the cat a lot of things to answer his name, to understand the world “no”, to play with a little ball, and to play hide-and-seek with me.
So we lived happily ever after.
vad menar du med att "the weather was hard"?
menar du att vädret är varmt?
vad gör man här
"The cat makes me feel better than I was. The cat was very beautiful, it was white and brown." Du skriver i preteritum, dåtid, alltså borde du skriva "The cat made me feel better". Du behöver inte ha med "...than I was." , det låter inte bra.
"Because she and I were best friends for five years. " - personligen hade jag skrivit "Because she and I had been best friends for five years."