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lovisla03 634
Postad: 15 sep 2019

Report, "Greta Thunberg and youth climate activists protest outside White House"

Jag har skrivit ett referat på engelska men kan inte så mycket engelska så skulle vara tacksam om någon vill kolla igenom min text och ge mig tips på vad jag kan justera. Här är artikeln jag skrivit referat av: https://www.theguardian.com/environment/2019/sep/13/greta-thunberg-white-house-climate-protest

Här är mitt referat:

Report of the article "Greta Thunberg and youth climate activists protest outside White House"

In the article "Greta Thungberg and youth climate activists protest outside White House" (The Guardian, Emily Holden, 2019-09-13) The Guardian writes about youth activists who collects outside the government in US to protest across their no acting for the environment. Greta Thunberg, who sailed to US the last month, joined a group protesting outside the White House. It was hard for Thunberg and the group to begin to march toward the White House because they got disturb by media. President Trump has tried to opposed work for the climate therefore he does not belive in the global warming. Almost all nations keep rising the temperatures to a dangerous level and they are 1C higher than before the industrializing. The gathering of the young people chanted "protect our future". Thunberg will testify against the US congress. The global strike is inspired by her. The UN general assembly will discuss the crisis and the same day activists will have a conference were they talk about fossil fuels. Thunberg say she is grateful for every one of those who were there and they will continue to strike. It seems to be around several houndred people there. A girl who is an organizer with the youth group Zero Hour says "they striking today to save tomorrow". Finally The Guardian writes that the worlds leading scientists have warned to not exceed  1.5C. At a 0.5C higher temperature the risks for extreme weather increase.

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Tack i förhand! 

Zedrye2 34
Postad: 15 sep 2019

Hej, jag ville bara berätta till dig att du hade väldigt många stavfel och din grammatik i denna texten var inte helt korrekt men detta är vad jag hittade och din text är nu mycket bättre i grammatiskt syfte.

In the article "Greta Thunberg and youth climate activists protest outside White House" (The Guardian, Emily Holden, 2019-09-13) The Guardian writes about youth activists who collect outside the government in the US to protest across their no acting for the environment. Greta Thunberg, who sailed to the US the last month, joined a group protesting outside the White House. It was hard for Thunberg and the group to begin to march toward the White House because they got disturbed by media. President Trump has tried to opposed work for the climate; therefore, he does not believe in global warming. Almost all nations keep rising the temperatures to a dangerous level, and they are 1C higher than before the industrializing. The gathering of young people chanted "protect our future." Thunberg will testify against the US congress. She inspires the global strike. The UN general assembly will discuss the crisis, and the same day activists will have a conference where they talk about fossil fuels. Thunberg says she is grateful for every one of those who were there and they will continue to strike. It seems to be around several hundred people there. A girl who is an organizer with the youth group Zero Hour says, "they striking today to save tomorrow." Finally, The Guardian writes that the worlds leading scientists have warned not to exceed 1.5C. At a 0.5C higher temperature, the risks for extreme weather increase.

frida33 10
Postad: 15 sep 2019

Dessa ändringar hade jag gjort:

In the article "Greta Thungberg and youth climate activists protest outside White House" (The Guardian, Emily Holden, 2019-09-13) the author describes a gathering of several hundred youth activists in Washington DC, protesting against the lack of environmental protection. Greta Thunberg, who sailed to US the last month, was joined by a group protesters outside the White House.

It was difficult for Thunberg and the group to march towards the White House because of the large media presence. President Trump has opposed measures to improve the climate crisis, because he does not believe in global warming.

Temperatures continue to rise globally, and most nations are unlikely to meet their set targets, thereby allowing temperatures to continue to rise to dangerous levels. They are already 1C higher than before industrialization.

The gathering of mostly preteens and teenagers chanted "protect our future". Thunberg will be testifying in front of US congress. The UN general assembly will discuss the climate crisis, the same day as activists will target a conference including  fossil fuel chief executives.

Thunberg says she is grateful for every one of those who were there and encouraged them to continue protesting in favor of climate action. A girl who is an organizer with the youth group Zero Hour says "We’re striking today to save tomorrow". Finally the author notes that the worlds leading scientists have warned that exceeding  1.5C, would mean risk for an increase in extreme weather.

lovisla03 634
Postad: 15 sep 2019

Tack för hjälpen!!

Zedrye2 34
Postad: 15 sep 2019

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