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Postad: 6 maj 2020 18:19

Skrivit en argumenterande tex på engelska.non kan tittar upp och rätta innan jag lämnar in ?

Carbon dioxide emissions are a big cause of climate change.The increase in global temperature is a fact about a future where reversing global warming is possible.People are hit hard by climate change and environmental degradation, especially those living in poverty and who depend on local resources.Droughts and floods mean people are forced to move in order to make living.

Tackling climate change require international cooperation and common targets to reduce emissions, find new energy solutions and protect the earth's resources.Burning fossil ,coal ,oil and natural gas, agra agriculture and deforestation leads to increased levels of greenhouse gases.The rich part of the world is behind most of the emissions that affect our climate.


Furthermore, analyses of how extreme weather events have changed over time are made more difficult by  the development of society and the ease of mixing up an increased vulnerability with a change in the occurrence of extreme many respects vulnerable as in our day.

Nayazo 148
Postad: 6 maj 2020 18:58

Skulle rekommendera att du försöker hitta synonymer till ord som tex ”big” för att texten ska låta mer professionell. Sen är det ett antal grammatiska fel samt ett ganska vardagligt språk.

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