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Postad: 2 nov 23:41

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The state slogan in Texas is Friendship

The state's nickname is The Lone Star State

State abbreviation for Texas is DC District of Columbia

Texas has a population of over 28 million (2020) people, while Sweden has about 10 million (2020). Texas has about twice the population of Sweden

Texas' area is 700 km2, while Sweden's area is 500 km². Texas is 200 m2 larger than the whole of Sweden. 

The capital of Texas is Austin, Austin has been the capital of Texas since 1846. 

The governor of Texas is Greg Abbott, Gregory Wayne Abbott was born Nov 13, 1957 in Wichita Falls. 

The Texas senators are John Cornyn and Ted Cruz. 
John Cornyn is 70 years old

Ted is 51 years old


Houston is a large city in Texas, with a population of 2 millions. 
San Antonio is a large city in south central, with a population  of 1 million. 

Dallas is a large city, with a population of 1 million


The state colors are blue, white and red. 

Texas State flower is bluebonnet 

The state animal of Texas is Longhorn

The state year in Texas is 29 December 1845

Texas has the highest mountain, and it’s called Guadalupe Peak. It’s 2, 667 meters high. 

Three sports teams in texas are Houston Rockets, Houston Texans and San Antonio

Three important agricultural products in Texas are Cotton, Hay and Get. 

Three famous people from the state are Vanilla Ice. He is an American rapper. Selena is an American singer. Steve Martin is an actor. 

the weather in texas actually isn't that bad, in texas they have 4 seasons some of them are a little bit longer than others. it is tropical climate

Texas the Lone Star State in the second largest state by area population and economy in America 
archaeologists believe that 3 major indigenous cultures lived within the areas that fell in the borders of present day texas. 

More wool comes from the state of Texas than any other state in the United States. 
The state was an independent nation from 1836 to 1845. 
Caddo Lake is the only natural lake in the state. 
Austin is considered the live music capital of the world. 
Texas comes from the Hasinai Indian word tejas meaning friends.  

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Postad: 7 nov 09:07

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Katnisshope 296
Postad: 7 nov 16:24
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